Friday Fictioneers

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When I get wound up

and out of key

I dive right in

headfirst

not to the sound of a different drum

and certainly not in tune

Crash bang

and splintered notes

echo dischords

of my doom.

Next time I’ll wait to compose myself

before entering the room.

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31 Comments

  1. “I dive right in headfirst..’ lol. entertaining read

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  2. “Next time I’ll wait to compose myself

    before entering the room.”

    Delicious wordplay, darling. Very nice.

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  3. Funny stuff. Could be in over his head though!

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  4. Although I don’t like this saying, I’ve “been there, done that.” Good job. (You knew I’d like the puns after what I wrote this week.) 🙂

    janet

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  5. Great poem! I enjoyed the puns immensely

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    • I am very pleased to provide enjoyment! Immensely! Wonderful! Hope you have a lovely day 🙂 Have you had a quick peek at my colouring book artwork? wildersoul.wordpress.com Sometimes they make handy writing or poetry prompts! 🙂

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  6. That was fun! I’m going back for another go!

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  7. Very nifty. I like it a lot.

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  8. Dear WS,

    Glad you dove in head first with this verse. Lot of layered and telling wordplay. I enjoyed this.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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